Make me a cake if you want me to
Eat. Place a sliver on my plate and I'll
Taste it with you.
Away with mere words.
Paint the sky, play
Hide and seek, let
Off or
Remain
silent.
originally I had 'silent' on the previous line but moved it because I thought it looked better by itself. It is a stupid poem. I was just playing with some thoughts about language and what I try to do when I write.
You seem to have a problem with s-words today. (Should that be 'sliver' not 'slither'?)
ReplyDeleteLet the reader understand...
that's what I get for blogging and doing 5 other things at the same time!
ReplyDeleteThough notice I used the plural with s-words...
ReplyDeleteI didn't want a capital. Is that what you meant?
ReplyDeleteYou need to blog more, or else I'll never get these essays done.
ReplyDeleteFair enough. I thought it might have been a failure of AutoCorrect or something. Maybe smaller letters slither better ;-)
ReplyDeleteoriginally I had 'silent' on the previous line but moved it because I thought it looked better by itself. It is a stupid poem. I was just playing with some thoughts about language and what I try to do when I write.
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