This is what I'm up to now. Interesting metre - 10 10 12 6. It needs a chorus/bridge/refrain/something and another verse.
There is a life that can unlock the grave
A power great beyond all earthly laws
A love so fierce it reaches into death to save
then holds our hearts secure
There is a stream where thirsty souls can drink
A place the weary rest amidst the strife
There is a table laid with wine and living bread
Where seeking souls find life
sar 2011
Nice!
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