by Joel R. Age 7.
[this is part 3 of a continuing saga]
Once upon a time people had taken over the banana system. But one day a banana became a banana-i (a banana jedi) and fought the people.
The banana-i drew his freezing light-saber and whacked the human's burning light-sabers.
Fj fj fj fj fj fj fj went the light sabers.
Then the banana-i whacked the human's waist. His body fell off his legs. The banana had won, but not completely. There were ten or so more people to deal with.
F-ching, b-ju, f-ching, b-ju, f-ching, b-ju! Out went the other people with a f-ching!
The banana had won. He went to the banana system and partied.
Watch out for Banana Bats 4 - The people strike back! The people have invented storm troopers, a type of robot built especially for war, dooming the banana-is....
Gold! That's brilliant!
ReplyDeleteI think it's kind of cool. But Joel isn't actually passing story writing at school... I'm bracing myself for a 'D' on his report.
ReplyDeleteFj! Fj! Fj! That was very awesome. I love his drawings, especially the dudes with their legs chopped off. You should rule up some pages like a comic book and he could make a little comic. I used to do that when I was a kid.
ReplyDeleteThis is fantastic, Simone! There has to be something wrong with the school system when that kind of imagination and creativity isn't being rewarded.
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